The graph show teh number of tourists viositing a particular carribiean island between 2010 2017. Summarize the information by selecting main feature and make comparison where relavent.
The given line chart illustrates the
number
of tourists
visiting a specific Caribbean island
between 2010 and 2017.
Overall
, the number
of visitors
of
that particular Caribbean Change preposition
to
island
experienced an upward trend. Moreover
, visitors
preferred staying on island
rather than staying on cruise ships.
In 2010, approximately 1 Add an article
the island
an island
million
tourists
visited the Caribbean island
, and it showed an increase throughout the period. In 2016, the number
of tourists
of
that Change preposition
to
Carribean
Correct your spelling
Caribbean
island
increased to around 2.7 million
, and in the next year 2017, the number
of tourists
reahched
roughly 3.5 Correct your spelling
reached
million
.
In 2010, around 0.3 million
visitors
preferred staying on cruise ships, and with a slight increase in 2011, which was approximately 0.5% million
, it experienced a decline to around 0.3 million
. However
, after that, the number
of visitors
staying on cruise ships experienced an increase, and in 2017, this
number
reached roughly 2 million
. Meanwhile, 0.7 million
tourists
preferred staying on island
in 2010. Add an article
an island
the island
Moreover
, from 2013 to 2015, this
number
stabilized and stands at around 1.5 million
. Then
, after a slight decline in 2016, it reached around 1.5 million
in 2017.Submitted by rahman_rehana on
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