The graph show teh number of tourists viositing a particular carribiean island between 2010 2017. Summarize the information by selecting main feature and make comparison where relavent.

The graph show teh number of tourists viositing a particular carribiean island between 2010 2017. Summarize the information by selecting main feature and make comparison where relavent.
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The given line chart illustrates the
number
of
tourists
visiting a specific Caribbean
island
between 2010 and 2017.
Overall
, the
number
of
visitors
of
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that particular Caribbean
island
experienced an upward trend.
Moreover
,
visitors
preferred staying on
island
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the island
an island
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rather than staying on cruise ships. In 2010, approximately 1
million
tourists
visited the Caribbean
island
, and it showed an increase throughout the period. In 2016, the
number
of
tourists
of
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that
Carribean
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Caribbean
island
increased to around 2.7
million
, and in the next year 2017, the
number
of
tourists
reahched
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reached
roughly 3.5
million
. In 2010, around 0.3
million
visitors
preferred staying on cruise ships, and with a slight increase in 2011, which was approximately 0.5%
million
, it experienced a decline to around 0.3
million
.
However
, after that, the
number
of
visitors
staying on cruise ships experienced an increase, and in 2017,
this
number
reached roughly 2
million
. Meanwhile, 0.7
million
tourists
preferred staying on
island
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an island
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in 2010.
Moreover
, from 2013 to 2015,
this
number
stabilized and stands at around 1.5
million
.
Then
, after a slight decline in 2016, it reached around 1.5
million
in 2017.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, tourists, island, visitors, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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