The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in 4 Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in 4 Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040
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The line graph illustrates the data about the percentage of the
population
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living in four Asian countries (the Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia) over three decades from 1970 to 2020, with estimations for 2030 and 2040.
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, the percentages of the
population
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living in all four showed upward trends, and it is expected that the
population
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will continue to increase. The Philippines had the highest
population
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percentage at the beginning of the period, and
at the end
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of the period, it is expected that Malaysia will have the highest rate. In terms of the
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in Malaysia, the figure stood at 30% in the first year, after which it increased gradually, reaching almost 70% in 2002. The number is
then
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predicted to reach the highest point (80%) in the final year.
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, in Indonesia, the rate started at around 30% in 1970 and is anticipated to peak in 2040.
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to the Philippines, the number went up from more than 30% in 1970 to almost 50% in 1990. It is forecasted to grow, reaching 50% in 2040.
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, in Thailand, the rate climbed steadily from almost 19% in 1970 to 45% in 2040.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • population density
  • rural-urban migration
  • economic development
  • industrialization
  • infrastructure strain
  • environmental impacts
  • social challenges
  • urban planning
  • government policies
  • housing policies
  • public services
  • trend analysis
  • prediction
  • initiatives
  • urban growth management
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