Write a letter to friend to inform them of a celebration you are having for a recent job promotion. Include information about The promotion The celebration Their accomodation

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Dear
jane
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Jane
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, How are you doing? It's been so long since we
last
were in touch.
i
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I
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want to share
a
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the
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news that
i've
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I've
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got
promotion
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a promotion
the promotion
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, to celebrate
this
,
i'm
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I'm
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inviting you and your family to a party hosted by me in
calgary
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Calgary
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. You know
i
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I
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have been waiting for
this
promotion since 2019 and luckily my appraisal qualifies
as
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me as
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a centre director of kids and
comapny
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company
Smart Tech. Well,
i'm
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I'm
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very excited for
this
new role after many years of hard work. The celebration will take place
saturday
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Saturday
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evening 20
december
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December
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, 2024 at our place. I've only invited
few
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a few
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friends and my colleagues. we,
biki
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bike
and me, decided that our home
will
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would
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be ok to stay for all our friends as it has five bedrooms and
garden
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the garden
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will be used for
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a party
the party
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party
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parties
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. Meals can be prepared
home
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at home
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and will
order
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be ordered
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as well. Can't wait to see you, with regards, Jennifer
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