The maps shows an industrial area in the twon of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarize the main features and make comparisons where relavant.

The maps shows an industrial area in the twon of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. 

Summarize the main features and make comparisons where relavant.
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The given two maps illustrate an industrial
area
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in the
town
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of Norbiton at present and its planned development for the
future
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.
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, at present, the
town
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of Norbiton has a very simple layout with a river,
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town
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a town
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and some factories.
However
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, the
future
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plan
of
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for
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the same industrial
area
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is significantly developed. A number of new
facilities
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will be added in the
future
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plan
such
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as a good number of housing
facilities
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, a playground, a school, a medical centre and some shops. In the north side of the
area
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, there is farmland on the opposite side of the river, and in
future
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plan
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plans
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, there will be housing
facilities
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. A bridge will be built, which will cross the river and connect with the circle of the industrial
area
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. Nowadays, the circle of the
area
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and the roads are surrounded by factories,
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, in the
future
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, the factories will be replaced by housing
facilities
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.
In addition
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, a playground will be built in the
north-east
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corner, and a school will be established in the east corner of the
area
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. In the
future
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, the
town
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in the west will be the same as the present. In the south, there will be a medical centre and some shops in the
future
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, town, future, facilities with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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