The maps shows an industrial area in the twon of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarize the main features and make comparisons where relavant.
The given two maps illustrate an industrial
area
in the Use synonyms
town
of Norbiton at present and its planned development for the Use synonyms
future
.
Use synonyms
Overall
, at present, the Linking Words
town
of Norbiton has a very simple layout with a river, Use synonyms
Use synonyms
town
and some factories. Correct article usage
a town
However
, the Linking Words
future
plan Use synonyms
of
the same industrial Change preposition
for
area
is significantly developed. A number of new Use synonyms
facilities
will be added in the Use synonyms
future
plan Use synonyms
such
as a good number of housing Linking Words
facilities
, a playground, a school, a medical centre and some shops.
In the north side of the Use synonyms
area
, there is farmland on the opposite side of the river, and in Use synonyms
future
Use synonyms
plan
, there will be housing Fix the agreement mistake
plans
facilities
. A bridge will be built, which will cross the river and connect with the circle of the industrial Use synonyms
area
. Nowadays, the circle of the Use synonyms
area
and the roads are surrounded by factories, Use synonyms
however
, in the Linking Words
future
, the factories will be replaced by housing Use synonyms
facilities
.
Use synonyms
In addition
, a playground will be built in the Linking Words
north-east
corner, and a school will be established in the east corner of the Correct your spelling
northeast
area
.
In the Use synonyms
future
, the Use synonyms
town
in the west will be the same as the present. In the south, there will be a medical centre and some shops in the Use synonyms
future
.Use synonyms
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