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The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.

The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.
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give
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 information about the result of
survey
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the survey
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 asked by 100 individuals who stayed in
Parkway
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the Parkway
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Hotel
 in
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two certain years, 2005 and 2010.
Overall
, it is noticeable that almost all
services
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the services
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 in
mentioned
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the mentioned
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hotel
had
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have
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 been improved because they have answered
positivly
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positively
.
To begin
 with,
acoording
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according
 to the
more
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previous year,
a
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less
half
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 of
hotel
 users
answsered
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answered
 that they
have
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had
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 received satisfactory
services
, recording the biggest part. The second largest percentage of people was 21%, making up approximately 21%.
Ther
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proportion
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proportions
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 of poor and very poor
were
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also
 nearly similar
each
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 other with 15% and 14%, respectively. Regarding the remaining information in
following
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the following
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 year, the ratio of individuals who there are good
services
 in
hotel less
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hotels
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 tripled compared to the
former
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previous
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 year and indicated the greatest ones among the quality of
services
. The figure for excellent was the most dramatically considerable factor, which was from 5% in 2005 to 28% in 2010.
Whereas
, roughly 17% of customers said that
services
 significantly decreased, by dropping around a triple.
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