Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Now a days

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, in the computer era we are living in, the majority part of some

children

’s day is spent on their

smartphones

.

This

is an inevitable consequence of modernization which can be considered as a double-edged sword. Our technology-based life and

this

addiction to

smartphones

in

younger

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generation have both some pros and cons that are going to be mentioned.

Smartphones

are the closest friends of

children

these days. You can hardly ever see a child not carrying a phone or tablet with

themselves

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either at home or anywhere else.

That is

,

children

of

this

era are simultaneously living in another world of their loneliness with their cutting-edge digital equipment. The reason why

this

disaster is gradually involving a huge number of

children

can simply be found in human’s new lifestyle. Being overwhelmed by various tasks and responsibilities all the

time

, parents are distracted from establishing healthy relationships with their

children

and spending enough

time

with them. That may be a substantial reason why the youth are drawn to their smart world. What is more, the modernized methods of education

such

as online classes, online researching and the use of artificial intelligence undeniably involve

children

with digital phones that leave no other

choices

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but to use them a lot.

Also

, the most essential way of contacting the pears is definitely via

smartphones

which makes the youth use their electronic devices for a long

time

to stay in touch with their friends.

in other words

,

children

do all their everyday tasks and needs

by

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with

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their

smartphones

. Spending a considerable

time

on digital devices has both effective and devastating effects on

young

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generation. An easily accessed and user-friendly source of information that smart devices offer has made a revolution in learning and keeping up with the new world that can efficiently improve learning in

children

.

However

, it has some drawbacks that may outweigh the advantages of that. The increased percentage of obesity and health issues, some mental disorders like concentration problems and making effective interpersonal relationships,

accessing

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to inappropriate sort of information for the youth and loss of creativity are some examples of disastrous impacts of technology on our new generation.

To conclude

,

children

spent

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a significant

time

on their

smartphones

due to

the modern lifestyle and teaching methods which despite the booming outcomes in learning and staying up to date, can have bad effects on their physical and mental health.