In some countries students are required to learn a foreign language but in other countries it is not necessary to do so. Discuss the benefits of each case and give your opinion.

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Some nations are required to learn a new
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mandatory to learn it.
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with the importance of learning
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language
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. First of all, learning
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language
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will improve the
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cognitive skills . Studies show that learning
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language
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can enhance the
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cognitive abilities and make them smarter .
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, learning a foreign
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expands the
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opprtuninty
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opportunity
to study abroad . For
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to study
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an
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important field of science that most of required to
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in English.
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, some people believe that learning
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burden on them since it will
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consume
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, some people do not like to take any
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which
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in learning
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skill or
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. In conclusion, learning
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language
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opportunities
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the
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cognation
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  • broadening horizons
  • cognitive abilities
  • competitive edge
  • global economic opportunities
  • cultural understanding
  • empathy
  • academic burden
  • stress-free education
  • in-depth studies
  • advancements and innovation
  • balanced approach
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