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In many countries, the amount of household waste like food packaging is increasing. What are the causes of this problem? What measures could be taken to reduce it?

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There is no denying the fact that household
waste
 must be regulated to limit its adverse effect on our
environment
.
While
 it is a commonly held belief that the amount of
this
waste
such
 as food packaging is increasing, there is
also
 an argument that opposes it.
This
 essay will analyze
this
 topic, discuss the factors of
this
 problem and include some procedures that could be taken in order to reduce it.
To begin
 with, recycling
waste
 is essential to protect our
environment
, but unfortunately, people do not allocate enough attention to
this
 matter for several reasons.
In other words
, lack of awareness and strict policies are some of the major causes.
In addition
, governments are avoiding to
involve
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 in
this
 issue because they believe there are more crucial topics to be handled.
For example
, allocating a significant budget to the industry sector will be beneficial for the country more than regulating household
waste
. In terms of the measures that could be taken to solve
this
 trend, as I mentioned above people
shall
Verb problem
should
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 be aware of the substantial effect of
this
waste
 on our
environment
, articles and short movies would be useful
also
. It is
also
 possible to say that, regulating the
waste
 by some policies will obligate households to adhere to
these regulation
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this regulation
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.
For instance
, the government could set a bunch of policies and procedures that regulate the
waste
 recycling process which will minimize
this
 problem. In conclusion, there are no easy answers to
this
questions
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. On balance,
however
, I tend to believe that it is crucial to protect our
environment
by
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in
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 all possible ways to
assure
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ensure
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 that
next
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the next
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 generation will have a nature that
free
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is free
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 from pollution.
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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