The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the
number
of Use synonyms
households
in the US based on their yearly income in 2007, 2011, and 2015.
In 2007, the majority of the population in the United States, Use synonyms
for
approximately 29 Change preposition
apply
million
Use synonyms
households
, gained annual income beyond 100 Use synonyms
thousand
Use synonyms
dollars
. Use synonyms
This
Linking Words
number
was followed by Use synonyms
households
with 25 to 50 Use synonyms
thousand
Use synonyms
dollars
and less than 25 Use synonyms
thousand
Use synonyms
dollars
, at 27 and 25 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
households
, approximately. Use synonyms
Lastly
, Linking Words
households
which had their revenue ranged from 50 to 75 Use synonyms
as well as
75 to 100 Linking Words
thousand
Use synonyms
dollars
stood at the fourth and the fifth Use synonyms
positions
.
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However
, in 2011, some major changes occurred, where the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
households
with 25 to 50 and less than 25 Use synonyms
thousand
Use synonyms
dollars
managed to take the first and second Use synonyms
positions
, respectively, accounting for about 29 and 28 Use synonyms
million
. Use synonyms
Households
with revenue higher than 100 Use synonyms
thousand
Use synonyms
dollars
were dragged to the third position, Use synonyms
while
the other two lowest stayed in the same position, with minor changes in their Linking Words
number
.
Even though the aforementioned two groups had managed to take the two highest Use synonyms
positions
, in 2015, Use synonyms
households
with income higher than 100 Use synonyms
thousand
Use synonyms
dollars
came back to dominance at 33 Use synonyms
million
. The rest of the groups stayed in the same rank, despite some minor changes in their Use synonyms
number
.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
households
which had earnings higher than 100 Use synonyms
thousand
Use synonyms
dollars
were the highest in the US, except in 2011, when those with revenue range from 25 to 50 and below 25 Use synonyms
thousand
Use synonyms
dollars
took the first and the second Use synonyms
positions
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, households, million, thousand, dollars, positions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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