You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar graph illustrates the
number
of households
in the US based on their yearly income in 2007, 2011, and 2015.
In 2007, the majority of the population in the United States, for
approximately 29 Change preposition
apply
million
households
, gained annual income beyond 100 thousand
dollars
. This
number
was followed by households
with 25 to 50 thousand
dollars
and less than 25 thousand
dollars
, at 27 and 25 million
households
, approximately. Lastly
, households
which had their revenue ranged from 50 to 75 as well as
75 to 100 thousand
dollars
stood at the fourth and the fifth positions
.
However
, in 2011, some major changes occurred, where the number
of households
with 25 to 50 and less than 25 thousand
dollars
managed to take the first and second positions
, respectively, accounting for about 29 and 28 million
. Households
with revenue higher than 100 thousand
dollars
were dragged to the third position, while
the other two lowest stayed in the same position, with minor changes in their number
.
Even though the aforementioned two groups had managed to take the two highest positions
, in 2015, households
with income higher than 100 thousand
dollars
came back to dominance at 33 million
. The rest of the groups stayed in the same rank, despite some minor changes in their number
.
In conclusion, households
which had earnings higher than 100 thousand
dollars
were the highest in the US, except in 2011, when those with revenue range from 25 to 50 and below 25 thousand
dollars
took the first and the second positions
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, households, million, thousand, dollars, positions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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