Many people believe that the internet is a problem for both a country and for individual people. To what extent do you agree with this?

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The world is very different today. Some
people
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in their personal opinion think the
internet
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makes
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creates
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big problems in
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countries.
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, many believe that the
internet
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is a
problem
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for
people
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. I partially agree with
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idea. I agree that the
internet
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can be
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problem
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a problem
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for some
people
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. But I do not agree that the
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internet
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is a
problem
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for the country.
This
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essay will show information to support my opinion. I
dont
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don't
agree
with
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that
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the
internet
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is bad for countries one hundred
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per cent
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. In my
view
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view,
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the
internet
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is great for a country .
Firstly
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,
people
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can learn new skills to
will
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bring
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back advantages for society. Many
people
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prefer reading new world news on the
internet
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.
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, communication on
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the internet
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internet
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for meetings online is very fast for Business . could they
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save
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time
.
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can seal clothes online
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easily
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for
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so
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they buy any things
your
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you
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needs
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need
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.
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Finally
, education nowadays
giving
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free books
in
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on
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the
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internet
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.
Although
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that will be back for children students in the country getting information to help anyone.
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, I agree with the notion
about
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that
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the
internet
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is bad and a big
problem
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for an individual person.
First,
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the
internet
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is bad for the health.
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as stay using the
internet
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over time
make
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makes
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body
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unhealthy . It
is make
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causes
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problems for
body
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the body
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. Well as eyes and back
becuse
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because
stay maybe six hours using
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internet
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the internet
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daily .
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, the
internet
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waste of time.
Althuogh
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Although
Not going outside with family and
ftiends
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friends
.In the
end
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the
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make
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makes
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hackers is not good for
socity
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society
.
Because
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the
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apply
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hackers
people
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steal
prievt
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private
information
for
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from
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people
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. In conclusion, the
internet
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is good for countries .
However
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,it Can be bad for some
people
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.
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