The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The table provides the
number
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of people who
travalled
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travelled
different
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regions compared at five-year intervals from 1990 to 2005.
Overall
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, the total
number
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of population who went
for
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on
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international travel depicted an ascending trend, with the first intervals recording the most significant increase. Interestingly, among the five areas, only the
number
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of visitors to America fluctuated. Looking in more detail, in 1990, the
number
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of people who went to Europe was 280,2 million and became the most popular country for tourists.
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,
this
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record increased slightly and remained the largest over the years, reaching 400,2 million in 2005.
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upward trend was followed by Asia and the
pacific
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Pacific
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, which saw a rise of approximately 20,000,000 per
intervals
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. During the same period,
although
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the
number
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of travellers to the Middle East
also
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experienced an increase every five years, it was constantly the smallest, rising from 9,8 in 1990 to 15,8 in 2005.
In contrast
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, America rose between 1990 to 2000 before dropping modestly to 113,2 in 2005,
while
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Africa climbed steadily but remained far lower than that of America.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • International travel
  • Million
  • Trend
  • Gradual rise
  • Significant jump
  • Technological advancements
  • Increased affluence
  • Globalization
  • Rate of increase
  • Low-cost airlines
  • Ease of travel
  • Tourism promotion
  • Regional differences
  • Cultural exchange
  • Economic impact
  • Environmental concerns
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