The graph below gives information about the origin of passengers entering Mexico of international flights, 2005-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph below shows information about the origin

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entering Mexico by international plane during the period between 2005-2010. All period USA were in the highest number from entering Mexico. But in 2009

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number of entering was

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years, Since 2005 to 2008 in second place were Europe countries with under two

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passengers. Following

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was Canada with

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is roughly 1.5 million visitors.in the

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place were S>America which peak approximately seven hundred passengers

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The graph below gives information about the origin of passengers entering Mexico of international flights, 2005-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Every year some languages die out. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier if there are few languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in order for them to continue with their work. Do you agree

Nowadays, most of the information is available on the Internet, whereas in the past, knowledge was stored in books and on paper. Do you think the advantages of this situation outweigh its disadvantages?

The percentage of overweight children in western societies has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the possible causes and effects of this disturbing trend and offer solution.

There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couples who decide to do this.