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The graph below gives information about the origin of passengers entering Mexico of international flights, 2005-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the origin of passengers entering Mexico of international flights, 2005-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph below shows information about the origin
peoples
Fix the agreement mistake
people
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 entering Mexico by international plane during the period between 2005-2010. All period USA were in the highest number from entering Mexico. But in 2009
this
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 number of entering was
small
Correct word choice
smaller
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 than
other
Change preposition
in other
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 years, Since 2005 to 2008 in second place were Europe countries with under two
millions
Change to singular
million
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 passengers. Following
next,
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was Canada with
peak
Correct article usage
a peak
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 is roughly 1.5 million visitors.in the
fourst
Correct your spelling
first
 place were S>America which peak approximately seven hundred passengers

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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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