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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams illustrate the floor plan of a public
library
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 20 years ago and how it appears today. Several changes have been made, transforming the
library
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 into a more multifunctional and modern space. In the past, the central
library
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 was divided into distinct sections for
adult
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 fiction,
adult
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 non-fiction, children’s
books
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, and a reading
room
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 for newspapers and magazines.
In addition
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, a set of tables and chairs occupied the middle of the floor, and there was an enquiry desk near the entrance. Currently, many of these features have been replaced or repurposed. The reading
room
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 and the enquiry desk are now a café and a computer
room
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, respectively. The area for children’s
books
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 has been expanded and enhanced with storytelling events and sofas for children. A lecture
room
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 has replaced the former
children
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children's
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 book area,
while
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 the
adult
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 fiction
books
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 area is replaced by all reference
books
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, but the section of
adult
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 fiction
book
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books
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 is switched to the right side,
along with
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 an information desk and
self service
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 machine. In conclusion, the
library
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 has evolved to serve a more diverse range of activities
while
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 still maintaining its core function as a resource
center
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centre
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 for
books
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, adult, books, room with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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