The chart below gives information about the UK's ageing population in 1985 and makes predictions for 2035. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below gives information about the UK's ageing population in 1985 and makes predictions for 2035. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 

Write at least 150 words.
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The provided chart compares data
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the United Kingdom's rate of people
aging
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65 and over within the year 1985 and in anticipation for 2035.
Overall
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, the given information points towards a higher proportion of individuals aged 65 and older in 2035
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compared
to 1985.
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Initially
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in 1985, the percentages that the UK and England withheld
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to have a similarity given the fact that both of them
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15%.
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, Wales was taking the lead of being the eldest region with approximately 17%,
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Scotland and Northern Ireland were left behind, respectively
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with
only about 14% and 13%. Looking ahead to 2035, the trend of an
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population continues across all regions. England is expected to rise to 23%, which is an 8% increase. Wales will see the largest growth, jumping to 27%, which represents a 10% increase. Scotland is
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predicted to have a significant increase, reaching 25%, a rise of 11%.
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, both the UK and Northern Ireland are projected to reach 23%, reflecting a rise of 10% for Northern Ireland.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Ageing population
  • Demographics
  • Percentage
  • Increase/Decrease
  • Predictions
  • Proportion
  • Region/Regional
  • Statistics
  • Gradual change
  • Elderly
  • Life expectancy
  • Healthcare
  • Birth rate
  • Comparative analysis
  • Trend
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