The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate changes in the museum between 1998 and 2008.
Overall
,although
rooms
changed their places, it is clear that
it become a more comfortable and developed place to visit.
At the outset, in both years the garden was in the centre of the museum and after 2 decades a new cafe sitting area and 2 fountains were constructed. Moreover
, Permanent Exhibition
rooms
,which were left side of the building disappeared and a new restaurant was built on the top left side. Furthermore
, the area of the temporary exhibition
room doubled and came to the left of the garden. Permanent Exhibition
rooms
were on the right and in 20 years they increased their place.
Additionally
, in spite of the shop, WC and room for the bags and coats were near the tickets and main door, after 20 years new permanent exhibition
rooms
were constructed in their place. And WC is located next to the cafe on the top of the garden, while
the shop and room for the coats or bags came
to the left side of the Tickets together.Wrong verb form
come
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