Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this problem? How can this problem be solved?

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become an
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over the world.
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solutions to overcome these problems.One possible cause is
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of immigrations in the cities around
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of
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owing to the newly
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should
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more cities to carry the extra
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of populations. Having
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the city.
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of immigrants will have a positive result
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good
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will overcome the high
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of populations .

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urbanization
  • Migration
  • Sustainable development
  • Infrastructure
  • Population density
  • Urban sprawl
  • Urban planning
  • Renewable energy
  • Family planning
  • Rural economies
  • Public transport
  • Living standards
  • Healthcare access
  • Educational facilities
  • Employment opportunities
  • Regulations
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