Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this problem? How can this problem be solved?

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number
of
population
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of
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large
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population
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become an
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incredible
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over the world.
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essay will discuss the issues of
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solutions to overcome these problems.One possible cause is
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assembling
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people
in one city , as there is a
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lot of
people
being crowded in
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area
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this
will increase the
number
of citizens,and it seems to put
people
together in a box.
Moreover
,
this
problem will
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to
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of food and water.
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, another possible reason is
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poor
management
, the
management
in
this
timeframe could
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many
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problem
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on
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people
and
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.
In contrast
, the administration could
also
control the
population
's numbers and
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rise to good
management
. perhaps the huge
number
of immigrations in the cities around
this
country
,
this
is a common issue and leads to a higher
number
of
population
owing to the newly
people
who enter the
country
.
This
might have advantages for the
country
such
as more workers for the
country
,but the drawbacks outweigh the advantages .
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drawbakcs
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drawbacks
drawback
will raise the
number
of
people
,and cause a negative effect
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this
country
.To recover from
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, I suggest that
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the government
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should
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more cities to carry the extra
number
of populations. Having
a
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good
management
will
controls
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the city.
Additionally
, I
propse
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propose
that the
administraion
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administration
must decrease the
number
of immigrants will have a positive result
over
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the
country
.
To sum up
,
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good
management
will overcome the high
number
of populations .
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

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Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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  • Migration
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  • Infrastructure
  • Population density
  • Urban sprawl
  • Urban planning
  • Renewable energy
  • Family planning
  • Rural economies
  • Public transport
  • Living standards
  • Healthcare access
  • Educational facilities
  • Employment opportunities
  • Regulations
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