Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this problem? How can this problem be solved?
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a
number of
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apply
population
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the population
incridible
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incredible
scare
over the world. Correct your spelling
scarce
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essay will discuss the issues of this
phenomenon and will implements
solutions to overcome these problems.One possible cause is Change the verb form
implement
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assembling
assembled
people
in one city , as there is a a
lot of Remove the redundancy
apply
people
being crowded in small
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a small
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areas
this
will increase the number
of citizens,and it seems to put people
together in a box. Moreover
, this
problem will leads
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lead
lack
of food and water. Correct article usage
a lack
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, another possible reason is the
poor Correct article usage
apply
management
, the management
in this
timeframe could leads
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many
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to many
problem
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problems
on
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for
people
and environment
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the environment
In contrast
, the administration could also
control the population
's numbers and gives
rise to good Correct subject-verb agreement
give
management
. perhaps the huge number
of immigrations in the cities around this
country
, this
is a common issue and leads to a higher number
of population
owing to the newly people
who enter the country
. This
might have advantages for the country
such
as more workers for the country
,but the drawbacks outweigh the advantages . This
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These
drawbakcs
will raise the Correct your spelling
drawbacks
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number
of people
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on
this
country
.To recover from this
issues
, I suggest that Fix the agreement mistake
issue
government
should Correct article usage
the government
developed
more cities to carry the extra Change the verb form
develop
number
of populations. Having a
good Remove the article
apply
management
will controls
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control
Additionally
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propose
administraion
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for
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion