Many people these days have computer, laptops, telephones at their home for work. Do you think, working from home has more advantages or disadvantages? Give reasons.

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Many people and
cooperations
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nowadays
work
at
home
using their laptops, computers, etc. In my opinion, working from
home
has more advantages than disadvantages. First of all, you can use your time more efficiently when you
work
in your
home
. Let's think you go to your office to
work
. You wake up, have
a
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breakfast, and grab your car key or take public
transportations
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to go to your
work
. In
this
case, you lose your time approximately 1 to 2 hours. But you
work
in your
home
, you skip
this
phase and simply start your task.
Secondly
, you can save your money to take a bus, subway, etc. In
korea
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, you pay 1500 KRW to take a bus and a subway. You pay even more when you take a taxi. You use almost 65,000 KRW to 70,000 KRW a month to take
a public transportations
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.
This
is
equal
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price of 3 meals.
Thirdly
, you can
work
in a
comfort
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mood which can increase your productivity. We can't
work
as
if
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we should when we commute to
work
in the early morning. Sipping tons of
coffees
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. But you can sleep or rest as much as you want and come back to
work
in fresh condition.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • advantages
  • benefits
  • disadvantages
  • drawbacks
  • flexibility
  • work schedule
  • elimination
  • commute
  • increased productivity
  • improved
  • work-life balance
  • cost savings
  • potential
  • distractions
  • social isolation
  • separating
  • supervision
  • limited
  • opportunities
  • career growth
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