Some think newspapers are the best method for reading the news while others think other media is better. Discuss both views anf give your opinion ?

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News
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is very important for everyone,
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however
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however,
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people argue that the best resource to read the
news
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is
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newspapers. I firmly agree that there are various
media
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electronic platforms nowadays where we can stay
uptodate
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up-to-date
with
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news
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the news
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.
This
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essay will examine both 2 views.
To begin
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with,
Newspaper
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a Newspaper
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is one of the legit
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because it
written
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is written
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by
certified
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a certified
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jurnalist
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journalist
and printed by
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a reputable
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company.
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, Compas
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media
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is a trusty company which has a great license established in 1980. People
known
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have known
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them since
along
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long
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time ago, so
that is
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why, people think that
newspaper
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newspapers
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is
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are
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still the best choice and more
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trustworthy
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comparing
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compared
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to other
media
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.
However
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, it is undeniable that we are living in an
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of
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technology era, where digital is now
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and impacts our daily lives, including the way we
consoming
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consume
the
news
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. Technology makes our
live
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easier
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to a few years ago, we can easily access
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through our
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phones
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due to
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there are many
media
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e-lectronics
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electronics
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this days
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these days
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,
such
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as
news
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web,
news
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app
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apps
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,
social
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and social
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media
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like Instagram, TikTok, X and Telegram as long as we
carefull
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careful
carefully
to consume
those
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that information
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information
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,
thus
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we
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are not consuming
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the fake
news
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. I personally think that
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apply
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digital
news
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is more convey
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compared
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to paper
news
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. The reason for
this
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is because digital
news
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is more
accesible
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accessible
and versatile which allows
user
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users
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to read
whereever
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wherever
they are and whenever they are just
acces
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access
them from
mobile
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a mobile
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phone.
To sum up
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,
eventhough
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even though
newspaper
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newspapers
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well
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are well
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known as a trusty and legit
information
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offer, I think that other
media
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offer the same service and even better
,
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apply
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because they
published
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publish
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it on digital
platform
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platforms
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which
make
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makes
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them more accessible and versatile.
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