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The differences in wheat exports of three areas from 1985 to 1990. Minh

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The given graph
showed
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 the differences in wheat exports of 3 regions. All the
statistic
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recorded
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 for the period
from1985
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from 1985
 to 1990. From
quick
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 glance, the chart showed 3
area
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areas
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 namely Australia, Canada, European Community almost fluctuated from 10 to 25
millions
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 tonnes. In
former
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, with Australia's exported wheat was quickly stable,
it's
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 just slowly went down by around 5 numbers. In latter, there was a gradual fall of 2 numbers in 1986 before
hitted
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 a quick bottom and dominated at 25 tonnes in the year 1988, after that, it's
hitted
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 a peak in the two
last
 years of the decade.
Finally
, the numbers of European Community spread wheat saw a fluctuation at around 15 and 17 in 4 years before
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 experienced a remarkable upward trend at 20.
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