The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.
This
map illustrates two proposed sites for a new school in the town
of Canterbury. Overall
, the most striking difference between the two sites are
the proximity of the Change the verb form
is
town
centre
,housing and connections.
It can be clearly seen that site
S1 is located in the northeast of the countryside and it is outside the town
centre
.Also
, site
S1 can be easily reached from the town
centre
by the main road. In addition
, site
S1 is long a way from Chartham about 10km. One notable point is that site
S1 is near to the Sturry which contains a large number of residents (7,000).
In contrast
, site
S2 is located to the south of the town
centre
and it is within the town
. Also
, site
S2 is close to the countryside which can get
benefit from it. To reach Chartham from S2 there is one main road and it takes 7km by car.Verb problem
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