The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Average distance in miles travelled per person per year, by mode of travel
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mode
of travelling in Uinted Add an article
the mode
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Kingdom
period
of 1985 to 2000.
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a period
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Overall
, it is clear from the graph that walking bicycle
, and local Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
bus
showed a reduction, Fix the agreement mistake
buses
whereas
other walking, car, train
, taxi, long distance Correct subject-verb agreement
trains
bus
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buses
other
showed a noticeable increment in their number.
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others
According to
what is shown, in 1985 all modes of travel recorded about 4,800 mile\person\year. Car was the predominant mode
of travelling by 3199 miles while
taxi recorded the lowest number by only 13 mile
.
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miles
train
hovering around 260 Correct subject-verb agreement
trains
mile
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miles
while
local bus
and other travelling Fix the agreement mistake
buses
mode
were approximately 440 Fix the agreement mistake
modes
mils
.
In terms of 2000, there was Correct your spelling
miles
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change in Add an article
a huge
average
distance per person per mile and Correct article usage
the average
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it
reach
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reached
aroung
6500. Walking, train, Correct your spelling
around
other
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and other
mode
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modes
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travelling showed Correct your spelling
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minor
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a minor
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Car
still has the highest portion by around 4800 miles. Taxi usage increased by more than double to reach 42 miles Add an article
The car
comapred
to 13 in 1985.Correct your spelling
compared
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