The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the three
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the population
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in Yemen and Italy in 2000 and the forecast for 2050.
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Overall
, it is predicted that the Linking Words
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of Yemen, that Use synonyms
initially
most populated by children, will shift to be dominated by society aged 15-59 Linking Words
years
old in 2050. Use synonyms
Whereas
in Italy, it is projected that it will remain most populated by a group of Linking Words
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old.
It can be seen that in 2000, children and youngsters aged 0-14 Use synonyms
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, the number is predicted to significantly decrease to only 37%. Linking Words
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initially
positioned as the second highest in the past, acquired 46.3% of the shares, forecasted to increase dramatically to 57.3% by 2050. Meanwhile, the older generation aged 60+ Linking Words
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old is expected to stay as the smallest proportion among the others, growing by only around 2% by 2050.
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On the other hand
, the largest proportion of the Linking Words
people
in Italy is predicted to remain unchanged, which is dominated by Use synonyms
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it will significantly drop from 61.6% to 46.2%. Linking Words
In contrast
, elders who shared 24.1% of the total Linking Words
population
in 2000, are expected to rise drastically to 42.3%, nearly catching up with the younger generation. Use synonyms
Finally
, the number of babies and juveniles aged 0-14 is projected to decrease slightly from 14.3% to 11.5%.Linking Words
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