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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The table depicts the quantities of
milk
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production
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 every year in four nations compared at ten-year intervals from 1990 to 2010.
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, the
production
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 of
milk
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 in the Netherlands was variable
while
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 Tanzania and Guatemala experienced growth over the period. Looking in more detail, the annual
milk
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production
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 in the Netherlands reached more than 11 million over the three years, representing significant
production
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.
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, they recorded a decrease
by
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of
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 107,000
liters
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litres
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 in 2000 before rising again
at
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to
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 11,466,000
liters
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litres
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 in 2010, the greatest of the four countries. During the same period,
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 Australia could produce
milk
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 more than Tanzania and Guatemala, it recorded a downward trend from 11,246,000 to 9,165,000.
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, the remaining two countries presented an ascending tendency. In detail, there was an increase of more than 50,000 in
milk
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production
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 in Tanzania, from 87,000 to 14,2000, and
this
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 growth continued in 2010. Guatemala, which
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 the smallest amount of
milk
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 in litres compared to the other nations, recorded a two-fold increase in 2000, reaching 55,000.
Although
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this
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 country still had the lowest
production
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, it rose to 84,000 in 2010.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, production with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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