The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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the line graph illustrates the rate

monthly

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temperatures in Celcius in three major cities.

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Dubai

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and Paris show similar

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on the line move but with different numbers.

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, Paris city recorded the lowest temperature.

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Dubai

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scored the highest figure.

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Sedney

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Sydney

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unstable

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movement

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movement

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with, Sydney started

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January by 24

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degree

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degrees

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and decreased until July by 14

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degree

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. After that. it's

increaded

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increased

until

return

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to the first digit.

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Dubai

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scored about 19

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degree

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in the first month.

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, it increased to the greatest temperature

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35.5

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degree

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degrees

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. But, it has a significant drop to 21

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degree

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degrees

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It is clear that

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Paris has a similar move to

Dubai

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. it scored the lowest statistic

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Jan by 5

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degree

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degrees

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. it is still increased till Jul and Aug months by 20

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degree

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degrees

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Finally

Finaly

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, it went down till Dec by just five

degree

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast".

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.

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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words dubai, degree with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "move" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

150 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

average monthly temperature
major cities
trends
temperature changes
comparisons
yearly pattern
geographical location
climate zones
significant variations
notable differences
peak temperatures
lowest temperatures
fluctuations
seasonal changes

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