You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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the line graph illustrates the rate

monthly

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temperatures in Celcius in three major cities.

Overall

Dubai

and Paris show similar

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on the line move but with different numbers.

Also

, Paris city recorded the lowest temperature.

In contrast

Dubai

scored the highest figure.

In contrast

Sedney

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Sydney

was

unstable

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movement

movment

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movement

To begin

with, Sydney started

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January by 24

degree

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degrees

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and decreased until July by 14

degree

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. After that. it's

increaded

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increased

until

return

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to the first digit.

In addition

Dubai

scored about 19

degree

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degrees

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in the first month.

However

, it increased to the greatest temperature

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35.5

degree

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. But, it has a significant drop to 21

degree

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Furthermore

It is clear that

Paris has a similar move to

Dubai

. it scored the lowest statistic

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Jan by 5

degree

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. it is still increased till Jul and Aug months by 20

degree

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Finally

Finaly

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Finally

, it went down till Dec by just five

degree

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Vocabulary: Replace the words dubai, degree with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "move" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

150 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

average monthly temperature
major cities
trends
temperature changes
comparisons
yearly pattern
geographical location
climate zones
significant variations
notable differences
peak temperatures
lowest temperatures
fluctuations
seasonal changes

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

A group of people think that the penalty for each kind of crime needs to equal, another group says that before giving punishment wants to analyse the stimulantt and motivation of the crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In many places, people's lifestyles are changing rapidly, and this affects family relationships. Do you think the advantages of such developments outweigh the disadvantages?

You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain: • Why you cannot pay the rent • When you will pay the rent. • How you will ensure you can pay your rent in the future

Nowadays crime movies, programmes and TV series are extremely popular. What do you think is the reason for this? What effects do these films have on our society? Give your own opinion and examples.

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