The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tables illustrate the data
sales
of Faitrade-labelled
coffee
and bananas in
Switzerland
, Denmark, Belgium, the United Kingdom and Sweden in the two years 1999 and 2004.
Overall
, for all five countries
sales
of both products increased significantly over the entire period.
Switzerland
marked the highest banana
sales
in both years.
At the end
of
this
period, the habit of drinking
coffee
among British residents increased dramatically. In 1999, in the United Kingdom
coffee
sales
rose greatly from 1.5
million
euros
to 20
million
euros
in 2004.
Switzerland
had the highest
sales
of
coffee
with 3
million
euros
before the number of
sales
doubled to 6
million
euros
in 2004. Denmark, Belgium and Sweden had almost
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the same number of
coffee
sales
which were 1.8, 1 and 0.8 (
millions
of
euros
), respectively. Before the
coffee
sales
in all three countries increased slightly to 2, 1.7 and 1 (
millions
of
euros
), respectively in 2004. In 1999,
Switzerland
had the highest banana
sales
rate at 15
million
euros
before it increased greatly to 47
million
euros
in 2004.
Sales
of bananas in Belgium and the UK nearly tripled from 1 and 0.6 (
millions
of
euros
) to 4 and 1 (
millions
of
euros
), respectively in 2004.
While
sales
of bananas in both Sweden and Denmark dropped from 1.8
million
Euros
and 2
million
Euros
to 1
million
Euros
and 0.9
million
Euros
in 2004.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, coffee, switzerland, million, euros, millions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • sales figures
  • percentage increase/decrease
  • European countries
  • sales volume
  • notable trend
  • exponential growth
  • moderate rise
  • marked decline
  • comparative analysis
  • economic factors
  • consumer preferences
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