The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The tables illustrate the

sales

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data for Fairtrade-labelled

coffee

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and bananas in the

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Switzerland

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Denmark

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, Belgium, and Sweden between 1999 and 2004.

Overall

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, the

sales

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of both

coffee

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and bananas increased significantly in all five European countries, except for

banana

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sales

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Denmark

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, which experienced a decline. The

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recorded the highest

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coffee

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while

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Switzerland

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led in

banana

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sales

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, in 1999,

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sales

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in the

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were relatively low at only 1.5

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euros

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, they increased significantly to 20

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euros

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by 2004, making the

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the leader in

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sales

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Switzerland

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saw a significant rise from 3

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euros

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in 1999 to 6

million

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euros

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in 2004.

Denmark

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also

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experienced a considerable increase in

coffee

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sales

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, rising from 1.8

million

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euros

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to 5

million

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euros

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during the same period.

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coffee

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sales

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in Belgium and Sweden remained relatively modest, growing from 1

million

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euros

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in 1999 to 1.7

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and 1

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euros

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, respectively, in 2004.

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banana

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sales

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showed notable differences across countries.

Switzerland

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had the highest

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of bananas, starting at 15

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euros

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in 1999 and soaring to 47

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euros

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in 2004. In the

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sales

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also

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increased significantly, from 1

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euros

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to 5.5

million

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euros

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Similarly

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, Belgium experienced growth from 0.6

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euros

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to 4

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euros

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. Meanwhile, Sweden’s

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rose slightly from 1.8

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euros

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to 2

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euros

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Denmark

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was the only country where

banana

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sales

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declined, dropping from 2

million

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euros

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in 1999 to 0.9

million

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euros

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in 2004.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, coffee, uk, switzerland, denmark, banana, million, euros with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 4 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

258 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Fairtrade-labelled
sales figures
percentage increase/decrease
European countries
sales volume
notable trend
exponential growth
moderate rise
marked decline
comparative analysis
economic factors
consumer preferences

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