The map illustrates the changes in Stockford City in 1986 and present time. Summarize the key points and make comparison. Wite the essay in 150 words.
The map provides information about the changes in StockFord city in 1930 and 2010.
Overall
, StockFord developed with more houses
and agricultural
area Add an article
the agricultural
was
decreased significantly
It was clearly seen from the map, Unnecessary verb
apply
there
were several things which had not changed Correct word choice
that there
such
as bridge
, post office, river Stoke, primary school and some Correct article usage
the bridge
houses
. The shops next to Correct article usage
the post
post
office were removed in 2010, there was Correct article usage
the post
only
Add an article
an only
the only
Correct article usage
a post
post
office in the area nearby. There were several roads extended because more and more Correct article usage
a post
houses
were constructed. Farmland besides
River Stoke in Replace the word
beside
South
of Correct article usage
the South
map
was wiped out in order to have more space for building Add an article
the map
houses
in 2010, The retirement home replaced
Add a missing verb
was replaced
for
large Change preposition
by
house
and Fix the agreement mistake
houses
garders
. There was only a primary school in 1930, Correct your spelling
garters
gardens
garden
however
there were 2 Add a comma
however,
houses
built next to primary
school. One tree in the corner was cut to have more Correct article usage
the primary
spaces
for Fix the agreement mistake
space
houses
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words houses with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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