In recent years a large number of highly skilled professionals like doctors, engineers and IT professionals from poorer companies are leaving their countries for developed countries for better paying jobs. What are the possible problems of this and what solutions can you suggest to deal with this issues.
For the past few years, a huge group of professionals like engineers, doctors and IT
are
Verb problem
have
migrating
to Wrong verb form
migrated
well known
and civilized Add a hyphen
well-known
countries
. Seeking for better job opportunities and enhanced lifestyle. In this
essay, I will tackle the issues and possible solutions for this
.
In every country
there are a lot of working professionals that are being underpaid and not being recognized. But Add a comma
country,
this
is more common to
poorer Change preposition
in
countries
and not well developed. For instance
, in my country Philippines, where a lot of employees have the potential to succeed on
their field, didn't have the chance to get promoted or get the right wages that they need. Change preposition
in
Therefore
, seeking and moved
to other civilized Wrong verb form
moving
countries
where they can find good salary
and a better lifestyle. The developed Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
countries
Singapore and Australia have the
bigger opportunities for Correct article usage
apply
the
IT professionals and Correct article usage
apply
to
other fields of Change preposition
for
works
. Fix the agreement mistake
work
In addition
to that, the great benefits and compensation is
based on Change the verb form
are
working
performance of the individual and it's being acknowledged. At the same time, providing excellent experiences and training for the growth of their employees are provided.
Despite Add an article
the working
of
Change preposition
apply
this
Correct determiner usage
these
circumtances
, the government must focus Correct your spelling
circumstances
circumstance
to solve
the problems for their citizens. Change preposition
on solving
First
is to have a genuine deal Correct article usage
The first
to
other Change preposition
with
countries
, like Singapore. Singapore is well-known to be the center
of the Change the spelling
centre
businesses
in Fix the agreement mistake
business
asia
. Change the capitalization
Asia
Furthermore
, they can provide the
help for poorer Correct article usage
apply
countries
through good investments and transactions. Where the
both Remove the article
apply
countries
can have a good benefits
for each other.
Correct the article-noun agreement
good benefits
a good benefit
To conclude
, for least develop
Change the form of the verb
developed
countries
they
need to prioritize their citizens and look for the right investment that they can put inside of their sovereignty. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Therefore
, citizens will not look outside of their homeland and stay there with the
good quality of lifestyle.Correct article usage
a
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