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Band 6.5

Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: – Your reason for writing – What you would like to happen – A nice, respectful style

#neighbour #dog #reason #style
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Dear Mr.
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Shreyas
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shreyas
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Shreyas
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, I hope you are doing well. I am
this
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 letter to express to you about your
dog
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. Your
dog
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 is barking loudly late at night
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 my sleep has not been good in recent times.
Firstly
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, I want to sorry to you because your
dog
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 is a child but he has been barking too high for the past couple of weeks. Even though
,
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 I tried to sleep but I could not sleep well
due to
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 your
dog
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’s noise. And one more, I had poor sleep for the
last
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 5 days. I hope you need to take your
dog
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 to the veterinary hospital to check his behaviour or better you just keep your
dog
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 inside your home so it could be more useful for me and the circumstances. I think you will take some necessary action for
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 issue, I am waiting for your valuable reply. Yours sincerely, SHREYAS
RAVICHNADRAN
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RAVICHANDRAN
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Coherence and Cohesion
Improve the logical structure by organizing related ideas more cohesively. Consider revising sentences for better flow.
Coherence and Cohesion
Make sure each paragraph focuses on a single clear idea. Break down or merge paragraphs if needed.
Task Achievement
Clarify the suggestions or actions you want your neighbor to take regarding the dog.
Task Achievement
The letter maintains a respectful and polite tone throughout, which is appropriate for the situation.
Coherence and Cohesion
The greeting and closing are properly formatted and contribute to a polite communication.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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