It is thought by some that a school teacher's role is to motivate and inspire students. However, other people believe that a teacher's primary role is to pass on knowledge. What do you think is a role of a teacher?

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A lot of people think that a school teacher's role is to motivate and inspire students, some think their role is to pass knowledge. There
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Make sure to fully develop your main points with specific examples and evidence to substantiate your arguments.
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Avoid abrupt endings and ensure that you conclude your essay with a summary of your main points or a final thought.
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Your essay begins with a clear statement of the issue and your stance, which helps to set the direction for your response.
content
The topic is adequately introduced, and your opinion is clearly stated, which shows confidence in your response.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • comprehensive development
  • fostering curiosity
  • building confidence
  • lifelong love of learning
  • solid foundation
  • critical thinking skills
  • academic success
  • educational landscape
  • navigating information
  • holistic education
  • ethical values
  • social responsibility
  • personalized learning
  • diverse needs
  • learning styles
  • tailored educational experience
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