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The maps below show changes in the Spanish city of Castellón in recent times. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show changes in the Spanish city of Castellón in recent times. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate the developments that have occurred in the Spanish
city
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 of Castellón from 2000 to the present day.
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, significant changes have been made, including the construction of new facilities, an improved transport network, and an expansion of recreational areas. In 2000, the
city
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 had a train station located near the
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center
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centre
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, alongside an old market. The university was situated to the north,
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 the
city
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center
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centre
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, surrounded by roads, was positioned centrally. To the south, the port was accessible by a main road. Today, the train station has been replaced with a new, more modern facility.
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, a bike rental scheme has been introduced nearby, indicating a shift toward sustainable transportation. The old market has been replaced with a covered market, and a new shopping
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center
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centre
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 has been built in the
city
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. A new hall of residence has been added adjacent to the university, offering more accommodation options for students. Another major change is the inclusion of a police station near the
city
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center
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. The
city
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 now
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 features pedestrian-only zones, enhancing accessibility and reducing traffic in certain areas. To the south, the port has been revamped with the addition of bars and clubs,
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 a cinema has been constructed nearby for recreational purposes. An airport, currently under construction, indicates future growth in connectivity. In summary, Castellón has undergone substantial modernization and development, transforming into a more accessible, sustainable, and entertainment-focused
city
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, center with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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