Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that athe circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivationfor committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that every

crime

should involve

punishments

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strategies which are fixed,

while

others argue that the

overall

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circumstances

of the

crime

situation including the individual

motivating

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for committing the

crime

should be considered regarding

punishment

decision.

To begin

with, proponents of the first viewpoint

believe

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that believe that fixed

punishment

could contribute to a more efficient legal system by providing clarity and simplifying the sentencing process,

while

could result in

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fewer appeals and a reduction in the time a case spends in the judicial system. Having fixed

punishment

for

crimes

could serve as a deterrent to potential offender

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since they would clearly understand the consequences of their actions.

Moreover

, fixed

punishment

could contribute to

establish

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equality in the sentencing, making sure that everyone received the same

punishment

for the same offence regardless of their background and social status.

However

, fixed punishments do not take into account the unique circumstances of each

crime

,

such

as the level of intent, which can vary greatly between cases and should influence the severity of the

punishment

. Taking into

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account

the circumstances and motivations behind

crimes

could lead to more just and tailored sentencing that considers the individual's background,

such

as socio-economic factors, psychological state,

coercion

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, potentially leading to rehabilitation rather than

punishment

. Considering circumstances can

also

help in addressing the root causes of the

crimes

, leading to

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reduced rates of

crimes

by taking preventive measures.

For example

, children from marginalized

background

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backgrounds

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might be involved in taking drugs

due to

the lack of family

relationship

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relationships

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and financial instability. In

this

case, taking rehabilitation approaches and providing secured livelihood opportunities

instead

of imprisoning these children will be more fruitful.

To sum up

, it is imperative to take into account the unique situation of every

crimes

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.