Organizing tours to remote places and communities is becoming more and more popular. Is it a positive or negative development for the local people and environment? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is clear that

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more and more people

visit

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places and

communities

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which are located in a remote area by tour companies.

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trend has a positive

development

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for the

locals

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and a negative

development

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for the

environment

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in many ways On the one hand, tourists

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visit

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visiting

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remote places and

communities

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bring many benefits

for

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to

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the

locals

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. One benefit is the

locals

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can have more job

oppoturnities

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opportunities

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, when travellers in foreign countries

visit

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remote mountainous regions in Dien Bien province located in

Northern

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the Northern

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of Viet Nam, the local people can become tour guides who introduce everything to

visitors

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so that they can understand more about local cultures, customs

as well as

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cuisines.

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, visiting remote areas and

communities

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can enhance economic

development

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locally.

Visitors

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pay more money for tickets, and the

locals

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can invest money in some projects to develop the area

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, when remote destinations and

communities

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visited by tourists can cause some environmental problems.

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,

visitors

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can throw

much wastes

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a lot of waste

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to

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into

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the

environment

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.

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, the beauty of nature is destroyed by garbage.

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, when

a significant amounts

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a significant amount

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of

visitors

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travelled

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to remote areas can lead to increasing gas emissions .

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, many

visitors

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would like to

visit

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Sapa, many private cars are in use to carry

visitors

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to

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apply

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there because it is difficult to go there by bus or large car.

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can cause more gas emissions released

to

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into

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the

environment

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. In conclusion, more

visitors

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travelling to remote places and

communities

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can have positive

development

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for the

locals

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,

however

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, it can lead to negative problems for the

environment

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.