he chart below shows the percentage change in share of international grduates in different canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main futures and make comaprisions where relevant

he chart below shows the percentage change in share of international grduates in different canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main futures and make comaprisions where relevant
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The chart illustrates the change in the
percentage
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change of the average of international
graduates
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in eight Canadian universities in 2001 and 2006.
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, New Brunswick , Nova Scotia and Quebec universities almost had the highest
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of international student
graduates
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in both years,
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Ontario had the lowest.
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with , in 2001, the average of overseas
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in New Brunswick was around 6% ,
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figure approximately doubled to %13, similar
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Nora Scotia where the
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of international students was around %6 in 2001 and
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became more than %10 by 2006.
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, the number of foreign
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in Alberta in 2001 was less than %5,
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percentage
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was almost the same as British Columbia, but in 2006, British Columbia considerably rose to more than 10% as opposed to Alberta , which had an increase by around 4% at 8%. Moving to Newfoundland and Labrador , Manitoba and Ontario, they had the lowest number of overseas
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in 2001, both Newfoundland and Labrador provinces and Manitoba as well had the same
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in both years at 4%,
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Ontario had 3% in 2001 and just above 5% in 2006.
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