he chart below shows the percentage change in share of international grduates in different canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main futures and make comaprisions where relevant
The chart illustrates the change in the
percentage
change of the average of international Use synonyms
graduates
in eight Canadian universities in 2001 and 2006.
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Overall
, New Brunswick , Nova Scotia and Quebec universities almost had the highest Linking Words
percentage
of international student Use synonyms
graduates
in both years, Use synonyms
while
Ontario had the lowest.
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To begin
with , in 2001, the average of overseas Linking Words
graduates
in New Brunswick was around 6% , Use synonyms
this
figure approximately doubled to %13, similar Linking Words
in
Nora Scotia where the Change preposition
to
percentage
of international students was around %6 in 2001 and Use synonyms
then
became more than %10 by 2006. Linking Words
Moreover
, the number of foreign Linking Words
graduates
in Alberta in 2001 was less than %5, Use synonyms
this
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percentage
was almost the same as British Columbia, but in 2006, British Columbia considerably rose to more than 10% as opposed to Alberta , which had an increase by around 4% at 8%.
Moving to Newfoundland and Labrador , Manitoba and Ontario, they had the lowest number of overseas Use synonyms
graduates
in 2001, both Newfoundland and Labrador provinces and Manitoba as well had the same Use synonyms
percentage
in both years at 4%,Use synonyms
While
Ontario had 3% in 2001 and just above 5% in 2006.Linking Words
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