The graph shows the income of four cafes in New York over the last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. Minh Bùi

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describe

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shows the profit of 4

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s namely The Tea Room, Internet Express,

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Café,

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and Café

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Café

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and Café

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Cool in New York over the

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year.

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, all

proportion

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proportions

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of café

earning

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earnings

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in

Wifi

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Café, Café Cool and Internet Express experienced

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upward

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while

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there was a drop

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in

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the Tea Room over the given period

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, the Tea Room's earning has a wealthy

beggining

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beginning

at 160 thousand

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dollars

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in January. After 2

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, it peaked

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20 thousand

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dollars

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that

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is the highest point in the

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.

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, the money they earned

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fluctuated around 120 to 150k

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dollars

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from April to October but later it saw a steep dive of 90k

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dollars

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from 140 to 50k

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dollars

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in the 2

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months

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.

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, the Internet Express's

earning

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is

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more stable than the

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one. It began at 100k

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dollars

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and finished at 120k

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. In the

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3

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, it saw a

quitly

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slight fluctuation around 100 and 90k of

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.

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continued its remained constantly at 80k of

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in 4

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from April to July but later it saw a steady upward

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of 60k of

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in the

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5

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in

revenue

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the revenue

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of

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Café and Café Cool over the given period. In the former, with

Wifi

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Café

earning

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, it saw a

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fluctuation in the

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5

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around 10k

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dollars

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from 50 to 60k

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but

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it peaked at 190k

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dollars

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in the

first

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7

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. In the latter, the Café Cool money made saw a stable

pluctuation

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from 30 to 60k

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dollars

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in 11

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which led to a remarkable upward

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by

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60k of

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in the

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month of the year