Task 1: (Table) The table below gives information related to population growth, average birth per woman, life expectancy at birth in countries with different income levels in 2000 and 2004. Summarise the information making comparisons where relevant.
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The table shows
population
increase, average birth
of each woman, and life expectancy at birth
in countries
with three distinct income levels (high, middle, and low) in 2000 and 2004. Overall
, high-income countries
have the lowest population
growth and highest lifespan expectancy, in contrast
, low-income countries
have the highest citizen growth and the shortest in terms of life expectancy.
It can be seen that countries
with high earnings experienced 0.8% population
growth initially
and 0.7% in 2004. Moreover
, the women population
in this
group only gives birth
to an average of 1.7, although
, it has the longest lifespan at 78 to 78.7 years old. Conversely
, it is shown that there are 2% and 1% populace increase in countries
with low salaries in the two given periods. In addition
, this
category has the shortest term of existence at only 58.1 to 58.8 years old. Additionally
, it has the highest birth
rate nearly reaching 4 on average.
Moving to the medium-income nations, this
section has a stable citizens increase at
0.9% each year. Change preposition
of
Furthermore
, the average birth
rate is at 2.2 in 2002 and decreases slightly to 21 in 2004. Finally
, people in these countries
usually live until the age of 69 to 70 from 2002 to 2004.Submitted by bilqissasha on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, birth, countries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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