The line graphs below show the subscriptions to mobile and fixed phone lines in four different countries between 2005 and 2015.

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the mobile subscription and fixed telephone lines in four different countries from 2005 to 2015.

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, throughout the

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, the

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for

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mobile phone

subscription

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subscriptions

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show

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an upward trend except in Eritrea, whilst

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fixed

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telephones

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remained stable. The subscriptions for mobile

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in three countries. The UK started highest with 100 people in 2005,

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slightly rose to around 120 people and remained stable ever since.

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, the

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for Uruguay and India

also

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from less than 50

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then

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gradually rose over the

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its peak of over 150 in 2013 for Uruguay before slowly

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to 150,

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less than 100 for India in 2015.

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contrast

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the

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for Eritrea levelled off in 10 throughout the

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.

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,

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subscription

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of

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fixed telephone shows stabilised except

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UK. The

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for the UK

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to decline with a slight rise in 2009

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50 in 2015. Others

shows

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a stable

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over the

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, with Uruguay

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30 and both India and Eritrea on the bottom line with less than 10 over the

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