The line graphs below show the subscriptions to mobile and fixed phone lines in four different countries between 2005 and 2015.
The line graph
illustrate
the mobile subscription and fixed telephone lines in four different countries from 2005 to 2015. Change the verb form
illustrates
Overall
, throughout the years
, the number
for
mobile phone Change preposition
of
subscription
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subscriptions
show
an upward trend except in Eritrea, whilst Wrong verb form
showed
for
fixed Change preposition
apply
telephone
remained stable.
The subscriptions for mobile Fix the agreement mistake
telephones
phone
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phones
increase
in three countries. The UK started highest with 100 people in 2005, Wrong verb form
increased
then
slightly rose to around 120 people and remained stable ever since. Similarly
, the number
for Uruguay and India also
increase
from less than 50 Change the form of the verb
increased
for
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apply
then
gradually rose over the years
until reach
its peak of over 150 in 2013 for Uruguay before slowly Wrong verb form
reached
fell
to 150, Wrong verb form
falling
while
less than 100 for India in 2015. In
contrast
the Add a comma
contrast,
number
for Eritrea levelled off in 10 throughout the years
.
On the other hand
, for
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apply
subscription
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subscriptions
of
fixed telephone shows stabilised except Change preposition
to
the
UK. The Change preposition
in the
number
for the UK tend
to decline with a slight rise in 2009 Correct subject-verb agreement
tends
thar
resulted Correct your spelling
which
over
50 in 2015. Others Change preposition
in over
shows
a stable Change the verb form
show
number
over the years
, with Uruguay approximately
30 and both India and Eritrea on the bottom line with less than 10 over the Change preposition
at approximately
years
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