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Band 4.5

You have recently visited a museum. Now write a letter to your friend about the museum you have visited. Write a letter to him/ her. In your letter, write: where you went what you saw there how you felt about it You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...................,

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Dear Priya, I Hope you are
going
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doing
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good
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well
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. I always Pray for your well-being . It's been so long
we
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since we
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meet
Wrong verb form
met
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. I
Wanted
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wanted
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 to discuss with you the museum
i
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I
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 have
visted
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visited
Last
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 week. I went to
science city
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Science City
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 which is located in
jalandhar
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Jalandhar
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 city. The
science city
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Science City
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 is
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a wonderfull
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wonderfull
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wonderful
 place to visit .There is a big globe in the museum which is the best part of that location . They showed us
animation
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an animated
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 movie and that big
globe
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Globe
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 cinema
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enhanced
enhnced
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enhanced
 the quality of the movie.I personally felt really delighted . I Want to invite you to come to visit
this
Linking Words
 museum so that we can enjoy time together and you can check
the
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out the
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brighlent
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brightest
 place . Yours loving Simran
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coherence cohesion
Focus on organizing the content into clear paragraphs to improve coherence.
coherence cohesion
Ensure smooth transitions between ideas to enhance logical structure.
task achievement
Pay attention to consistent verb tenses and correct punctuation for better clarity.
greeting and closing
Nice greeting and closing that make the letter feel warm and personal.
task achievement
Good task response by addressing all the points: where you went, what you saw, and how you felt.
suitable writing tone
The tone is friendly and appropriate for a letter to a friend.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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