the chart below give information about world spending and population. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

the chart below give information about world spending and population. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts provide information on global expenditure across five categories and the distribution of the world’s
population
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across various regions.
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, it is evident that a significant portion of global spending is allocated to food,
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clothing receives the least expenditure. In terms of
population
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, Asia accounts for more than half of the world’s
population
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, with the remaining regions making up smaller proportions. In the world spending chart, food constitutes the largest share, representing 24% of total expenditure.
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is followed by transport at 18% and housing at 12%. A significant 40% is categorized as “other,” covering various unspecified areas. Clothing,
by contrast
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, accounts for the smallest proportion, at just 6%. Turning to the world
population
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chart, Asia dominates with 57%, making it the most densely populated region. Europe and the Americas each make up 14%,
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Africa follows with 10%. The remaining 5% is grouped under “other,” indicating sparsely populated areas or regions outside the major continents.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words population with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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