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The chart below shows the percentages of different types of household waste that were recycled in one city between 1992 and 2002

The chart below shows the percentages of different types of household waste that were recycled in one city between 1992 and 2002
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The chart illustrates the
propottion
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proportion
 of not similar types of household waste that
where
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were
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 recycled in
city
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the city
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 between 1992 and 2002.
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, we can easily notice that the percentage of household waste recycled increased dramatically by 2002,
excepte
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except
 recycle of plastic, which stayed the same since 1997. It is clear from the graph that, in two thousand two glass was the most recycled item, unlike plastic, which was the opposite, the lowest
percent
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per cent
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 of it was recycled
one
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apply
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in 2002.
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 in 1997
recycle
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recycling
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 of paper increased
since
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from
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 1992 to 1997. The figure is 10
percent
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per cent
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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