Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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illustrated map provides an idea about how construction planners have decided to build a shopping centre and divide the land into two sections. Linking Words
Overall
, the area is split into two main lands divided by a river, with roads and railways spread all over the town.
Starting with the first area, S1 is expected to include a housing estate in the north and a large golf course-park hybrid spanning the largest area available in the Linking Words
near west
. A little under Correct your spelling
nearwest
half
of the city centre is located in S1, with most of the main road and Use synonyms
half
of the railroad Use synonyms
also
built there.
The second Linking Words
half
is S2, it's supposed to house most of the city centre, with an industrial space near the far eastern side. Most of the railroad and streets are spread across S2. S2 covers most of the available land, which makes it the larger Use synonyms
half
of the entire landUse synonyms
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