You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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This
illustrated map provides an idea about how construction planners have decided to build a shopping centre and divide the land into two sections. Overall
, the area is split into two main lands divided by a river, with roads and railways spread all over the town.
Starting with the first area, S1 is expected to include a housing estate in the north and a large golf course-park hybrid spanning the largest area available in the near west
. A little under Correct your spelling
nearwest
half
of the city centre is located in S1, with most of the main road and half
of the railroad also
built there.
The second half
is S2, it's supposed to house most of the city centre, with an industrial space near the far eastern side. Most of the railroad and streets are spread across S2. S2 covers most of the available land, which makes it the larger half
of the entire landSubmitted by miralaltalhi11707 on
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