You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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This
illustrated map provides an idea about how construction planners have decided to build a shopping centre and divide the land into two sections.
Overall
, the area is split into two main lands divided by a river, with roads and railways spread all over the town. Starting with the first area, S1 is expected to include a housing estate in the north and a large golf course-park hybrid spanning the largest area available in the
near west
Correct your spelling
nearwest
. A little under
half
of the city centre is located in S1, with most of the main road and
half
of the railroad
also
built there. The second
half
is S2, it's supposed to house most of the city centre, with an industrial space near the far eastern side. Most of the railroad and streets are spread across S2. S2 covers most of the available land, which makes it the larger
half
of the entire land
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words half with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "divide" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • city planners
  • proposed
  • shopping mall
  • the main features
  • comparisons
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • recommendation
  • site selection
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