The table below provides statistics on several major metro (MRT) systems around the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below provides statistics on several major metro (MRT) systems around the world.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table chart provides key information about various major
metro
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(MRT) numbers around the world. The table includes four features City,
Year
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complated
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completed
, Total
length
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and Carrying
capacity
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per
year
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.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that the old metros are
more
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bigger in the tall
of
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than
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the new
one's
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.
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,
most
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in most
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of the cities that they built a new
metro
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they
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apply
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decrease
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decreased
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the total
length
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,
whereas
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the
capacity
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do
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not
depends
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on the
year
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complated
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completed
.
According to
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what is shown,
London
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the London
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metro
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was
the
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first opened
metro
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in 1863, and with the biggest
length
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by
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of
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1100km,
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it carries about 548 million per
year
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.
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, Paris started in 1890 with 594 total
length
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and 850
capacity
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. The third
metro
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was in Tokyo in 1904 with 149
length
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and 1434. As we can see there is a shrink in the
length
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while
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there
are
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an increase
on
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in
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capacity
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. In terms of, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles where the
last
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three metros'
complated
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completed
. In 1921 Washington DC
startted
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started
with 114 lengths and 70
capacity
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.
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, Kyoto opened in 1980 with 11 total
length
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and 11.
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, Los Angeles was the
last
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completed
metro
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in 2001 with 14 total
length
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and 90
capacity
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, while".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words metro, year, length, capacity with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "provides" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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