The table below provides statistics on several major metro (MRT) systems around the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
The table chart provides key information about various major
metro
(MRT) numbers around the world. The table includes four features City, Use synonyms
Year
Use synonyms
complated
, Total Correct your spelling
completed
length
and Carrying Use synonyms
capacity
per Use synonyms
year
.
Use synonyms
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the old metros are Linking Words
more
bigger in the tall Change the word
apply
of
the new Change preposition
than
one's
. Change noun form
ones
In addition
, Linking Words
most
of the cities that they built a new Change preposition
in most
metro
Use synonyms
they
Correct pronoun usage
apply
decrease
the total Wrong verb form
decreased
length
, Use synonyms
whereas
the Linking Words
capacity
Use synonyms
do
not Change the verb form
does
depends
on the Change the verb form
depend
year
Use synonyms
complated
.
Correct your spelling
completed
According to
what is shown, Linking Words
London
Correct article usage
the London
metro
was Use synonyms
the
first opened Correct article usage
apply
metro
in 1863, and with the biggest Use synonyms
length
Use synonyms
by
1100km, Change preposition
of
Linking Words
while
it carries about 548 million per Correct word choice
apply
year
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Paris started in 1890 with 594 total Linking Words
length
and 850 Use synonyms
capacity
. The third Use synonyms
metro
was in Tokyo in 1904 with 149 Use synonyms
length
and 1434. As we can see there is a shrink in the Use synonyms
length
Use synonyms
while
there Linking Words
are
an increase Change the verb form
is
on
Change preposition
in
capacity
.
In terms of, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles where the Use synonyms
last
three metros' Linking Words
complated
. In 1921 Washington DC Correct your spelling
completed
startted
with 114 lengths and 70 Correct your spelling
started
capacity
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, Kyoto opened in 1980 with 11 total Linking Words
length
and 11. Use synonyms
However
, Los Angeles was the Linking Words
last
completed Linking Words
metro
in 2001 with 14 total Use synonyms
length
and 90 Use synonyms
capacity
.Use synonyms
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