The line graph illustrates that the amount of coffee sent abroad from Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica between 2002 and 2012. A glance at the graph reveals that all of the exports reached a higher capacity than in the begining.

The line graph illustrates that the amount of coffee sent abroad from Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica between 2002 and 2012. A glance at the graph reveals that all of the exports reached a higher capacity than in the begining.
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A line graph indicates data
which
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apply
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a
cofee
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coffee
export from 3 types of country
such
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as
Brazil
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, Colombia and
Costa
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Rica
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between 2002 and 2012.
Also
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, the table
represent
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the proportion that changes between these exports for these
years
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.
Overall
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, it can be seen that
,
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Costa
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Rica
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's
consumptions
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have
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been declining for the first 4
years
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.
However
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,
this
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indicator is observed in the form of growth in
Brazil
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and Colombia. And all three have reached their maximum
at the end
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of the cycle.
According to
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the line graph,
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coffee
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exports to
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and
Costa
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Rica
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started at a close figure at the beginning of the period, but in 2006 they were at a minimum in
Costa
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Rica
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. and
at the end
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of the period,
Brazil
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was in the first place with the highest limit.
Costa
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Rica
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ranked third among all three countries in coffee
send
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abroad with 20 kg.
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, Colombia started exporting 5 kilograms in 2002 and
this
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figure has reached about 12 kilograms within 4
years
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. In the next two
years
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, it fell to a low level and peaked at 15 kilograms in 2012.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words brazil, costa, rica, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Line graph
  • Illustrates
  • Amount
  • Exported
  • Abroad
  • Capacity
  • Trends
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Significant
  • Peaks
  • Troughs
  • Reasons
  • Climate
  • Demand
  • Trade policies
  • Compare and contrast
  • Fluctuations
  • Economic conditions
  • Agricultural developments
  • Unique elements
  • Production scale
  • Market strategy
  • Global coffee demand
  • Agricultural technology
  • International trade agreements
  • Competitiveness
  • Quality
  • Reputation
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