WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. upper river (slow

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

upper river (slow
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the graphic illustrates the development of
Salmon
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fish
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from an egg throughout their life cycle which is
also
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considered to be a large
fish
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species and
have
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has
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three stages
are
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apply
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fly, smolt and
an
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apply
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adult
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salmon
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with different sizes.
Firstly
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, the
adult
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Salmon
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fish
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travel to slow streams upper
river
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in order to lay eggs in
river
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reeds under small stones for nearly five to six months before the Flyfish are born, which measure 3-8cm,
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they start to travel fast stream in a deep
river
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for approximately four years until they grow up to Smolt
fish
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at 12-15 cm.
Secondly
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, the
last
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stage of
this
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process is the Smoltfish moving to the open ocean for around five years where it becomes an
adult
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salmon
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fish
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which measures nearly 70- 76 cm. Before the process just happened again with these adults
Salmon
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mated and moved to the slow-moving upper
river
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to put their eggs under reed plants.
Overall
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, the life cycle of
Salmon
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is a natural operation and contains three cyclical phases, beginning with the laying of eggs and ending with the
adult
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Salmon
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fish
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.
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