The first chart shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first pie chart provides data about the average measure of power used in an average Australian home. The second chart gives information about greenhouse
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that result from using the same energy. Both the rate of usage and the amount of Use synonyms
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discharge are loosely connected with a few odd cases.
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, Heating is the most used household tool and it Linking Words
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most of the air pollution.
Energy usage is mostly dominated by heating in general, With normal Heating covering 42% of power usage, Followed by water heating at 30%. Cooling and lighting use the least number of power at a total of 6%, Use synonyms
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other appliances use 17% and food refrigeration at 7%.
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at a rate of 32%, followed by other home appliances at 28%. Unlike water-based heating, Normal heating only Use synonyms
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lighting and cooling at a total of 11%.Linking Words
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