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The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newsport city centre from 2003-2012.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparations where relevant

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newsport city centre from 2003-2012.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparations where relevant
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The line graph illustrates changes in the
number
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 of reported
incidents
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 of
burglary
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,
car
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theft
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, and robbery in
Newsport
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Newport
 city
center
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centre
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 from 2003 to 2012.
Overall
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,
burglary
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 experienced a significant decline over the
period
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,
while
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car
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theft
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 remained relatively stable with minor fluctuations. Robbery consistently accounted for the lowest
number
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 of
incidents
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 and showed minimal variation. At the beginning of the
period
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,
burglary
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 was the most prevalent crime, with around 3400 reported cases in 2003.
This
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 figure rose slightly to a peak of over 3500 in 2004 before declining sharply over the next three years to approximately 1200 in 2007.
After
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this
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 point, the
number
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 of
burglary
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incidents
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 stabilized, fluctuating slightly but remaining near 1200 until the end of the
period
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 in 2012.
Car
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theft
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,
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, exhibited relatively minor changes throughout the decade. Starting at approximately 2700
incidents
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 in 2003, the
number
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 of cases dipped slightly in 2006 to just below 2000 but rose again to nearly 2500 in 2010. By 2012,
car
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theft
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incidents
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 leveled off at around 2000. Robbery consistently had the lowest figures, with reported cases remaining between 500 and 1000 throughout the entire
period
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.
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 minor fluctuations were observed, the trend showed no significant increase or decrease, with values hovering close to 700 in most years.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, incidents, burglary, car, theft, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
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