The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newsport city centre from 2003-2012.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparations where relevant

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in  Newsport city centre from 2003-2012.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparations where relevant
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The line graph illustrates changes in the
number
of reported
incidents
of
burglary
,
car
theft
, and robbery in
Newsport
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Newport
city
center
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centre
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from 2003 to 2012.
Overall
,
burglary
experienced a significant decline over the
period
,
while
car
theft
remained relatively stable with minor fluctuations. Robbery consistently accounted for the lowest
number
of
incidents
and showed minimal variation. At the beginning of the
period
,
burglary
was the most prevalent crime, with around 3400 reported cases in 2003.
This
figure rose slightly to a peak of over 3500 in 2004 before declining sharply over the next three years to approximately 1200 in 2007.
After
this
point, the
number
of
burglary
incidents
stabilized, fluctuating slightly but remaining near 1200 until the end of the
period
in 2012.
Car
theft
,
on the other hand
, exhibited relatively minor changes throughout the decade. Starting at approximately 2700
incidents
in 2003, the
number
of cases dipped slightly in 2006 to just below 2000 but rose again to nearly 2500 in 2010. By 2012,
car
theft
incidents
leveled off at around 2000. Robbery consistently had the lowest figures, with reported cases remaining between 500 and 1000 throughout the entire
period
.
Although
minor fluctuations were observed, the trend showed no significant increase or decrease, with values hovering close to 700 in most years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, incidents, burglary, car, theft, period with synonyms.
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