The chart below shows the percentage of households owning four types of electronic devices between 1995 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The chart illustrates the number of four distinct electronic devices (MP3 player, mobile phone, computer, and tablet) owned by households from 1995 to 2015.
Overall
, it can be seen that the trend for all devices is increasing each year, with the most significant going to mobile phones and the lowest being MP3 players.
In 1995, the MP3 player was the most popular Linking Words
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among people, accounting for around 15%of, Use synonyms
although
, it is outnumbered by a significant amount of 70% of houses owned mobile phones in 2000. Linking Words
Whereas
computers had the same amount of ownership as MP3 players in 2000, which was around 25%, Linking Words
however
, computers experienced a dramatical rise since Linking Words
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to almost 100% in 2015, whilst Linking Words
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type of Linking Words
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has a lower number than handphones from 2000 to around 2012, it achieved the same number in the Use synonyms
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given period.
In around 2002, tablet Linking Words
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was introduced to the public, since Use synonyms
then
, the amount of people who have these devices has grown from around 9% in 2005 to over 60% in 2010, and slightly higher than 80% in 2015. Linking Words
Therefore
, Linking Words
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ranked three compared to the others. Use synonyms
Finally
, in terms of MP3 players, Linking Words
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maintained a stable increase in the 20-year period, it was the lowest, with only 40% of people having it in 2015.Use synonyms
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