The chart below shows the average price per kilo of clothing imported into the European Union from six major countries of origin in 1993 and 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart illustrates the average price per kilo
of
exported into the European market garments in 1993 and 2003.Change preposition
apply
Overall
, there were 6 main Linking Words
cloths
exporters, and the vast majority Change the noun form
cloth
is
the Asian countries.
To start with, there are only two countries which have decreased their Wrong verb form
were
prices
in 2003. The first one was Argentina, with an average of about 27 Use synonyms
pounds
in 1993 and just above 25 Use synonyms
pounds
in 2003. Japan has Use synonyms
also
reduced its clothing Linking Words
prices
by a few Use synonyms
pounds
to some 13 in 2003.
Except for Argentina, Brazil is the second Latin American exporter, Use synonyms
however
, the price of garments has remained the same, at about 23 Linking Words
pounds
on average, throughout the observing period.
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On the other hand
, 3 out of 4 Asian states have increased the average value of exported garments. Linking Words
For instance
, Linking Words
Bangladesh
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Bangladesh's
prices
have grown twice more throughout 10 years, reaching almost 7 Use synonyms
pounds
in 2003. China and India have raised the clothing value not Use synonyms
with
the same speed, but the add-ups were Change preposition
at
also
substantial, from 10 Linking Words
pounds
on average to just above 15 in the first country and from about 7 Use synonyms
pounds
to almost 13 in the latest.
In conclusion, I want to emphasize Use synonyms
on
the trend for Change preposition
apply
the
clothing price growth in less developed Asian countries with low primary values. Correct article usage
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Moreover
, Latin America did not act the same, as cloth Linking Words
prices
have either decreased or plateaued.Use synonyms
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words prices, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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