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The table below shows the change in the number of full-time Indian university students at six British universities between the academic years 2020/21 and 2021/22. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the change in the number of full-time Indian university students at six British universities between the academic years 2020/21 and 2021/22. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
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 table illustrates data on the change in the figure of full-time
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university
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students
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 across six British universities during the academic year 2020/21 to 2021/22.
Overall
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, the table clearly shows that the largest
increase
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 in the number of
Indian
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students
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 was observed at Sheffield
University
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,
whereas
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 the lowest one was at BPP
University
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. In terms of the percentage
increase
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 in
Indian
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students
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, three UK universities saw a significant rise, with Sheffield
University
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 experiencing the highest
increase
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 at 187.7%, followed by Coventry
University
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 at 121.3%, and The
University
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 of Leicester at 103.4%. Specifically, Sheffield
University
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 had a noticeable growth in 2021/22, with an
increase
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 of 1530
students
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, rising from 815 to 2,345
students
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.
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, the number of
Indian
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students
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 at Coventry
University
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 and The
University
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 of Leicester rose by 2900 and 1215
students
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, respectively, during the same period.
On the other hand
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, the universities that witnessed the lowest growth in the number of
Indian
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students
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 were The
University
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 of Greenwich (46%), followed by Anglia Ruskin
University
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 (69%), and
finally
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 BPP
University
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 (46%), with
growth
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the growth
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 of 2,085, 1,340, and 1,640
students
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, in that order.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words indian, university, students, increase with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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