the charts give information on the ages of the populations of yemen and italy in 2000 and projection for 2050. summerize and make comparision
The pie charts provide information about
age
distribution in two countries Yemen and Italy in 2000 and prediction for 2050.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
age
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group
which had the highest percentage in each country in 2000 is predicted to Use synonyms
be reduce
in 2050. In 2050, Yemen is expected to witness Change the verb form
be reduced
youthful
Correct article usage
a youthful
population
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whereas
Italy witness Linking Words
ageing
Correct article usage
an ageing
population
.
In 2000, the Use synonyms
age
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group
under 15 years old took the lion’s share of the Use synonyms
population
in Yemen, at 50.1%. Use synonyms
This
was followed by the adult Linking Words
group
at 46.3%. Use synonyms
However
, it is predicted that there will be some changes after 5 decades when the second rank Linking Words
group
in 2000 will surpass the first with Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
a
population
of 57.3%, which is approximately 20% higher than the under 15 category. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the elderly Linking Words
group
still remain the lowest percentage despite being predicted to grow Use synonyms
2.1
% in 2050.
Change preposition
by 2.1
On the other hand
, the adult Linking Words
group
was responsible for the highest Use synonyms
population
where Use synonyms
it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
accounted
for 61.6%, which was over Wrong verb form
accounting
a
half of the Correct article usage
apply
population
in Italy in 2000. At the same time, the Use synonyms
population
of the elderly ranked second at 24.1%, Use synonyms
therefore
, the under 15 years of Linking Words
age
class took the remaining 14.3%. Italy is expected to witness an alternative Use synonyms
population
in the next 50 years where Use synonyms
ageing
Correct article usage
an ageing
population
will happen in the region as the proportion of Use synonyms
over
60 Correct article usage
the over
age
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group
will increase to 42.3%, accounting Use synonyms
only
4% less than Change preposition
for only
adult
Add an article
the adult
an adult
group
. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, the children Linking Words
group
is likely to decline in 2050 and is expected to be the Use synonyms
age
Use synonyms
group
with the lowest rate, at 11.5%.Use synonyms
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