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SECOND DAY The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

SECOND DAY The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The table depicts the amount of
milk
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production
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anually
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annually
 in four different countries in two-year intervals from 1990 to 2010.
Overall
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, the
Nethelands
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Netherlands
 produced the most
milk
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 over the period, yet it
was fluctuated
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. Meanwhile, the
production
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 of
milk
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 in Guatemala showed an increase, despite it
produced
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 the lowest amount in the three
year
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years
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. Looking in more detail, The Netherlands produced over 11 million
liters
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litres
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 in every period, starting at 11,262,000 in 1990.
Production
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 decreased by 107,000 before rebounding in 2010 with a final value of 11,466,000. During the same period,
although
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 Australia recorded a downward trend, declining from over 11 to 9, it remained the second-largest
milk
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 producer.
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,
milk
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production
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 in Tanzania recorded an upward trend, with a 55,000 increase for the former and a 3,000 increase for the latter.
Similary
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Similarly
, Guatemala's
milk
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production
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 rose from 26,000 to 84,000, remaining below 100,000 litres in every section.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, production with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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